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Introducing Our Acquaintance, the Atom:



Reposted from my blog, Doomsday Writer originally posted January 15, 2020

Since nuclear weapons unleash the power of the atom in explosions of amazing destructive power, it’s necessary to understand what an atom is to better be able to understand what they can do.

Atoms are the smallest particles of matter that make up chemical element – which are things like oxygen, carbon, helium, iron, silver, gold and (for our purposes) uranium and plutonium.  Atoms are incredibly small (and are actually made up of smaller bits, which are themselves made up of even smaller bits).

One atom is one ten-millionth of a millimeter or 1/254,000,000 of an inch. Trying to get your head around the atomic scale is pretty much the reverse of trying to grasp the cosmic scale, but Corridor Crew’s video “VFX Artist Reveals the True Scale of Atoms” is helpful for getting the idea across.

Atomic Structure:  Atoms are composed of two main components: the electron and the nucleus.

  • Electrons – negatively particles that orbit around the atom’s nucleus. Traditionally, at least since 1913, this has been depicted as being similar to the way planets orbit the Sun: in neat, circular orbital paths that never cross over with each other. This model is inaccurate, at least for elements other than hydrogen, but it suffices for our purposes.

  • Nucleus – the core of the atom which is made up of:

    • Protons: positively-charged particles that make up the bulk of an atom’s mass. They’re positively-charged particles; they are the bulk of an atom’s mass, being about 2000 times heavier than the electron. The number of protons in a nucleus is always the same and is equal to the element’s atomic number.

    • Neutrons: have no charge and are, therefore, neutral particles. They are slightly heavier than protons. The number of neutrons in a nucleus can vary from atom to atom, even within the same element. These variations are called isotopes (more on this in a minute)




It’s Particles All The Way Down:

Electrons are considered to be elementary particles, since they cannot/do not break down any further. Protons and neutrons on the other hand can be broken down into smaller elementary particles called quarks, which are held together with gluons (because they “glue” the quarks together into larger particles).

There’s a whole zoo of elementary particles, most of which are not germane to our discussion. Suffice it to say that Augustus De Morgan’s 1872 poem, "Siphonaptera"is a fairly apt description of an atom (just substitute "particles" for "fleas"):

Great fleas have little fleas upon their backs to bite 'em,
And little fleas have lesser fleas, and so ad infinitum.
And the great fleas themselves, in turn, have greater fleas to go on;
While these again have greater still, and greater still, and so on.


Elements and Isotopes:

Elements are substances that contain only one type of atom and cannot be broken down into a simpler substance. There are 92 naturally occurring elements and 24 synthetic elements (i.e. elements first created in laboratories, though some of these have since been found in nature).  They are the building blocks of other matter.. [(1)]

All atoms of a particular element have the exact same number of protons.  The number of protons in a nucleus is element’s atomic number. Hydrogen’s atomic number is 1; uranium’s atomic number is 92. All hydrogen atoms will have 1 proton; all uranium atoms will have 92 protons. On the periodic table, elements are ordered, in part, by their atomic numbers.

The total number of protons and neutrons in an atom is known as the atom’s mass number.  While the total number of protons in an atom’s nucleus will always remain the same, the total number of neutrons can vary from atom to atom. [(2)]

This variation is called an isotope and is usually written as the element’s name (or abbreviation) along with the isotope’s mass number. [(3)] 

For example:  the most common isotope of carbon has a nucleus that holds six protons and six neutrons. It’s written as carbon-12 or C-12.

Isotopes can be heavier or lighter than the standard for their element. For our purposes, think of isotopes as variant cover versions of a comic book. The difference in the number of neutrons won’t alter an element’s chemical properties, any more than an alternate cover will change the story inside the comic book.

What the difference in neutrons does affect is how stable and, therefore, how radioactive an isotope is.

Elements and stability: Elements can be stable or unstable, depending on how well they hold onto their neutrons and protons. Think of a shopper trying to fill a bag with apples and oranges. For our purposes, the shopper is the atom, the fruits are the protons (apples) and neutrons (oranges) that make up the nucleus and the bag is the binding force that holds the nucleus together.

In the case of a stable atom/element, the bag is strong enough to contain the fruit without tearing. With an unstable atom/element, the bag isn’t strong enough so it tears and allows an apple or orange to spill out and go bouncing off to cause citrusy chaos.

  • Stable atoms/elements are not radioactive and do not emit radiation. Carbon-12 is an example of a stable element.

  • Unstable atoms/elements are radioactive and emit radiation through radioactive decay (more on this in a moment). Carbon-14 is an unstable element, which is a big part of why it is used to help date certain archaeological finds.


Radioactivity, Radiation and Radioactive Decay:

Radioactivity is, according to Merriam-Webster.com, “the property possessed by some elements […] of spontaneously emitting energetic particles […] by the disintegration of their atomic nuclei.

Radiation is, also per Merriam-Webster.com, “the process of emitting radiant energy in the form of waves and particles [and/or] the combined processes of emission, transmission, and absorption of radiant energy”. Scientifically speaking there are several different types of radiation, but the ones we’re most concerned with are:

  • Electromagnetic radiation: which includes radio waves, microwaves, infrared, the visible light spectrum, ultraviolet, x-rays and gamma radiation.

  • Particle radiation: which includes fast-moving subatomic particles such as alpha particles, beta particles and neutrons.


Radiation can be further categorized as being ionizing or non-ionizing radiation. Both types can come in the form of particles or waves. The differences are:

  • Ionizing radiation is high-energy radiation that can directly disrupt chemical bonds by stripping electrons from atoms. In living tissue, ionizing radiation can cause damage to proteins, to DNA and damage or destroy cells.

    • Types of ionizing radiation: X-rays, gamma rays, ultraviolet B (UVB) and ultraviolet C (UVC ) rays, alpha and beta particles, neutrons.



  • Non-ionizing radiation: is lower energy radiation that cannot disrupt chemical bonds, but instead can increase the thermal energy of atoms and molecules (aka heat)

    • Types of non-ionizing radiation: radio waves, microwaves, infrared and visible light, and ultraviolet A (UVA) radiation.




Radioactive Decay: Stable elements, like Popeye, are what they are and that’s all that they are. They do not change, even during a chemical reaction they stay who they are. Coal is, primarily, made of carbon. When you burn coal, its carbon atoms don’t change into another kind of atom.

Unstable elements change over time. This process of change was first discovered by French physicist Henri Becquerel in 1896; it was confirmed – and named radioactive decay – by Marie and Pierre Curie in 1898. Both Becquerel and the Curies were awarded the Nobel Prize in Physics for this discovery in 1903

Nutshell Definition: radioactive decay occurs when an atom undergoes a random change that causes it to turn into something else – either a different isotope of itself (C-12 becoming C-14) or into an entirely different element, which can be stable (Uranium-238 to Lead-206) or unstable (Uranium-238 to Thorium-234). This process is called a decay chain.

There are, of course, different types of radioactive decay. We’re going to be focusing on the three that seem to come up the most with regards to nuclear weapons:

  • Alpha decay – the nucleus of the atom emits an alpha particle (two protons and two neutrons; essentially a helium-4 nucleus). Alpha particles are, generally speaking, mostly harmless to humans and can be shielded against by a piece of paper. [(4)]

  • Beta decay – the nucleus of the atom emits a beta particle, either by releasing a negatively-charged electron, causing a neutron to change into a proton (beta-minus decay) or releasing a positron (essentially a positively-charged electron) and a proton becomes a neutron (beta-plus decay). Beta particles are able to penetrate living tissue, but can be shielded against by, among other things, a few millimeters of aluminum. [(5)]

  • Gamma decay – After a nucleus emits either an alpha or beta particle, the new “daughter nucleus” is usually left in a high-energy, excited state. If so, it may decay by releasing a gamma ray photon. Gamma radiation has little trouble passing through substances, especially the unshielded human body, which makes it the most immediately dangerous. Shielding against it requires thick, dense materials, like lead.  [(6)]


Next time, we'll take a look at the health effects and risks associated with exposure to radiation.

Footnotes:



  • [1]Note on Compounds and Molecules: Compounds are combinations of two or more different elements; water is a compound formed from one oxygen atom and two hydrogen atoms; table salt is a compound of chlorine and salt.
    Molecules are groups of atoms; they can be a collection of atoms of the same element (an iron molecule) or a collection of compounds (a water molecule)

  • [2]Hydrogen Isotopes are a bit different than other elements’ isotopes. It’s most commonly found isotope, hydrogen-1, doesn’t have a neutron. Other hydrogen isotopes, starting with hydrogen-2 and higher, do have neutrons. Hydrogen isotopes also have proper names in their own right: hydrogen-1 is known as protium; hydrogen-2 is deuterium and hydrogen-3 is tritium. To further add to confusion? Deuterium has one proton and one neutron; tritium, 1 proton and 2 neutrons; hydrogen-4, 1 proton and 3 neutrons and so on and so forth.

  • [3]Or as 12C or 12C, which seems to be more in use by actual scientists. Since I’m not an actual scientist, I’m going to stick with the element-number versions because those are easier to write and (for me) to code into html.

  • [4]So long as they stay outside the human body, alpha particles are entirely harmless. If they get inside the human body, by being inhaled, consumed with food/drink, or enter through broken skin, they can cause significant amounts of internal, long-term damage, mostly by increasing cancer risks.

  • [5]Beta particles are more dangerous than alpha particles, since they can penetrate unshielded skin. Like alpha particles, the main risk is an increased, long-term cancer risk.

  • [6]If you don’t have any lead handy, you can also shield yourself from gamma rays using other materials – but you’re going to need to use more of them. For example, you can get the same protection as 1.3 feet of lead by using 13.8 feet of water or 6.6. feet of concrete. (source: http://nuclearconnect.org/know-nuclear/science/protecting)


Note on Sources and a Caveat/Plea for Mercy:


In addition to the sources cited directly in this article, I also made use of information from Wikipedia, both the standard English version and the Simple English version

I also made use of information from Using Medicine in Science Fiction: The SF Writer’s Guide to Human Biology by H. G. Stratman, specifically from chapter 6, Danger! Radiation!.

Any errors in this article are my responsibility. In my defense, I am not a physicist and my last chemistry class was during the Reagan administration. If you find an error, please bring them to my attention and I will correct them.

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Originally posted at: Nuke Opera 2020: Introducing Our Acquaintance, the Atom January 15, 2020
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Nuke Opera 2020: A Reading List



Reposted from my blog, Doomsday Writer; originally posted January 12, 2020


Introduction:

Since tonight is going to be an earlier than usual night for me, I figured I’d toss up a list of the Nuke Opera books I’m planning on taking a look at. The idea, right now, is to start at the top of the list and work my way down, since I’m thinking that’ll be a good way to explore how the subgenre developed and changed over time. How well that plan will go depends on how easily I can find my copies of these books.

Nuke Opera Reading List:
  • The Survivalist: Jerry Ahern, Book #1: Total War (1981) -- the book that started the genre
  • Ashes: William W. Johnstone, Book #1: Out of the Ashes (1983) -- a long running series by a prolific author and easy one of my least favorite examples of the genre for reasons I'll get into later on.
  • Wasteworld: James Barton, Book #1: Aftermath (1983)
  • Amtrak Wars: Patrick Tilley, Book #1: Cloud Warrior (1983)
  • The Outrider: Richard Harding, Book #1: The Outrider (1984)
  • Doomsday Warrior: Ryder Stacy, Book #1: Doomsday Warrior (1984)
  • Traveler: B. Drumm, Book #1: First, You Fight (1984)
  • The Zone: James Rouch, Book #1: Hard Target (1984)
  • The Guardians: Richard Austin, Book #1: The Guardians (1985)
  • A.D.S.: John Sievert, Book #1: C.A.D.S. (1985)
  • The Last Ranger: Craig Sargent, Book #1: The Last Ranger (1986)
  • Endworld: David Robbins, Book #1: The Fox Run (1986) -- I’m also going to be looking at the prequel, Endworld: Doomsday, published in 2009, which is set 100 years before the series begins and helps set up/flesh out the series backstory.
    • Note: David Robbins wrote in a wide variety of genres, as did/do a lot of nuke opera writers. He's written horror stories, war stories and Westerns, including a long-running series, Wilderness, about the adventures of mountain man, Nathaniel King (a former accountant who went West looking for adventures) and his family. Robbins crossed this series over with Endworld in Giant Wilderness #6: Frontier Strike, where the leads from Endworld travel back in time and join forces with Nathaniel King. Nuke operas can be weird.
  • Deathlands: James Axler, Book #1: Pilgrimage in Hell (1986) – The longest-running nuke opera series; it reached 125 print books and is still being produced in audiobook form by Graphic Audio, which has adapted the 125 print books and produced 10 audiobook exclusive stories (and counting)
  • Phoenix: David Alexander, Book #1: Dark Messiah (1987)
  • Roadblaster: Paul Hofrichter, Book #1: Hell Ride (1987)
  • Wingman: Mack Maloney, Book #1: Wingman (1987)
  • The Marauders: Edward M. McGann, Book #1: The Marauders (1989)
  • Blade: David Robbins, Book #1: First Strike (1989) – Spin-off series from Endworld
  • Eagleheart: T. Westcott, Book #1: Silver Wings and Leather Jackets (1989) a rare nuke opera series intentionally written to be funny.
  • Omega Sub: David Cameron, Book #1: Omega Sub (1991)
  • Swamp Master: Jake Spencer, Book #1: Swamp Master (1992) – a very late entry into the nuke opera genre, written just after the end of the Cold War and demonstrating the necessity of finding a new Big Bad.
  • Outlanders: James Axler, Book #1: Exile to Hell (1997) – a spin-off/sequel series to Deathlands. Also, the second longest-running nuke opera series (ended with 75 books).
Note: I believe that these series represent pretty much the entirety of the genre but I'm more than happy to be proved wrong; if you know of a series I've missed, feel free to drop a mention in the comments.
Nuke Opera Adjacent Books:
  • Horseclans: Robert Adams, Book #1: The Coming of the Horse Clans (1975) -- adjacent because it falls outside my established timeline for the genre (1980-1991); haven't read it yet, but from what I hear, it sounds like it might be an early example of the genre.
  • I, Martha Adams (1984) by Pauline Glen Window -- adjacent because it isn't a series, but it's definitely earned a place at the table.
  • Amerika (1987) by Brauna E. Pouns, Patrick Anderson -- Novelization of the 1987 TV miniseries about the Soviet Union invading America. Adjacent because while nuclear weapons are part of the invasion, they're used to create EMPs to knock out America's communications networks, not to destroy cities.
Additional Reviews: These books and stories aren’t nuke operas themselves, but are included because I feel they have important things to say about the nuke opera subgenre. This list will likely be added to as time goes on.
  • Lot (1953) and Lot’s Daughter (1954) by Ward Moore – I’m looking at these two stories because they are in sharp contrast to the macho, action-adventure fantasy of most nuke opera stories.
  • A Boy and His Dog (1969) by Harlan Ellison
  • Farnham’s Freehold (1964) by Robert A. Heinlein – This book is included because I feel that it is a forerunner to/trope originator for the nuke opera subgenre.
  • The Long Tomorrow (1955) by Leigh Brackett
  • That Only a Mother (1948) by Judith Merril
  • Gate into Women’s Country (1988) by Sheri S. Tepper
  • The Chrysalids (1955) by John Wyndham – published in the US as Re-Birth
  • Z for Zachariah (1974) by Robert C. O’Brien – I might do a compare/contrast with this and the movie.
I plan to look at Lot, Lot’s Daughter, and A Boy and His Dog before I start on the nuke operas themselves. Again, plans are subject to change. Right now, I’m working on some explanatory articles about the science behind nuclear weapons and the history of the Cold War as well as an article fleshing out just what I mean when I say "Nuke Opera." I should, fingers crossed, have at least one of those articles up by Wednesday.
But for now, as I said, tonight’s an early night for me so I’m going to get this posted and go to bed. Hope you’re having a good week and I’ll talk to you soon!

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Originally posted at: Nuke Opera 2020: Reading List, January 12, 2020

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Nostalgia, Nuclear War and Navel-Gazing: An Introduction to NUKE OPERA 2020

Reposted from my blog, Doomsday Writer; originally posted January 8, 2020

Nostalgia:

This is the year I turn fifty and like a lot of people do when they find themselves approaching the half-century mark, I’ve found myself turning introspective and more than a bit nostalgic for the years of my childhood. [1]

Of course, being me and having spent the majority of my formative years in the 1980s, one of the things that fuels a lot of my introspection and nostalgia is nuclear war. The other is science fiction. So, guess what we’re going to be talking about over the next however many blog posts?

I was twelve when I first discovered science fiction – for the definition of ‘discovered’ that boils down to ‘became aware of the fact that this thing I liked had a name.’ Prior to that age, I’d been absorbing science fiction for years, mostly through cartoons like Space Ghost and Johnny Quest (the 1960s one); TV shows like Quark and Buck Rogers (the 1980s one); and, of course, movies like War of the Worlds (the 1950s one) and Star Wars (the 1970s one). Really, science fiction was something I grew up surrounded by and didn’t really notice, for much the same reason fish probably don’t notice water.

But it was at twelve that I discovered that science fiction came in book form and never looked back. Exactly when and where I was when this happened, I can’t remember. I believe, though, the first book that sparked my sense of wonder was The Weapon From Beyond, the first book in Edmond Hamilton’s Starwolf trilogy. Though it might also have been Little Fuzzy by H. Beam Piper. Or maybe the Northwest Smith stories by C.L. Moore or maybe…well, suffice to say, once I was hooked, I was hooked.

I was thirteen when I first learned about nuclear war – for the definition of ‘learned about’ that includes ‘became aware of the fact that this thing that could kill me and everyone I knew was a thing.’ Prior to that age, I’d likely heard about the bomb – after all, there’s a scene in War of the Worlds (1953) where the U.S. Government attempts to nuke the Martians with no real success – but the idea that nuclear war was a thing that could/would happen outside of a movie had escaped me until that day in 8th grade history class.

Over the course of my K-12 school career, I was very lucky to have three teachers who helped spark my interest in history. Mrs. Pamphile in the 5th grade, who turned history into stories; Mr. Herodotus in high school whose approach was more like a college lecture but who still managed to keep me interested in US and World history. (Not that this was exactly difficult, since even back then I enjoyed lectures.) [2]

And then, in 8th grade, there was Mr. Newburgh who was the kind of history teacher every kid should have. During a unit on World War I, Mr. Newburgh came in dressed as a doughboy; for a unit on the Great Depression, he had us play stock market so we could get a better feel for how/why the market crashed. He also talked to us about He combined the best of Mrs. Pamphile and Mr. Herodotus, using stories and facts to help make the past come alive for us.

Nuclear War:

Exactly when he taught us about nuclear war, I can’t recall. I want to say it was in the fall, but it might have been spring – the 8th grade history classroom, at that time, was a windowless concrete box with no windows to the outside so I don’t even have vague memories of the weather to go by.

As part of his lecture, Mr. Newburgh gave us all handouts about fallout patterns and taught us that if, say, Chicago to the west or Grissom Air Force Base to the south were hit, we could expect to receive some of the fallout. Since this was about 36 years ago, I don’t remember much more of what he said though I do remember Mr. Newburgh being sincerely angry that the Carter administration had made some sort of an agreement that had increased our risk of being wiped out by the Soviet Union. I remember being taken aback in part because this was the first I’d heard of this and because I’d rather liked President Carter. [3]

Like I said, I don’t remember much of the lecture, but I do remember that it wasn’t particularly scary or really even anything I thought about very much – at least, not then. Of course, part of the reason I didn’t think much about it was because at thirteen, I wasn’t paying all that much attention to the news at the time. [4] Since this was the latter half of the Cold War, at a time when tensions between the US and the Soviet Union were ramping up to levels not seen since the end of the Cuban Missile Crisis, my lack of awareness about the state of the world was probably a good thing.

That said, it was still an unescapable bit of conventional wisdom that World War III was pretty much a given; that it was a question of when, not if the nukes would fly. Hell, even to this day I’m periodically honestly amazed that it didn’t happen – especially now that I’ve read into some of the actual history of the time and just how close we came to having World War III happen by accident. Hell, in 1983 alone we had two incredibly close calls within the space of about two months.

Speaking of 1983, that was the year I found an old hardback copy of The Best from Fantasy and Science Fiction, Third Series on one of the bookshelves at my house. The book was an anthology featuring exactly what it said on the tin: stories from The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction that were considered the best for the year of 1953.

Among the stories collected in that volume was Ward Moore’s Lot, a story that skirted the edge of science fiction since it was clearly set in the then-present day of the early 1950s. The only speculative element was that the United States had been bombed by the Soviets and our protagonist and his family were reacting to those attacks by trying to flee to safety. It’s the first story I can remember reading that dealt with the immediate aftermath of a nuclear attack and it gripped me – though, I didn’t quite grasp the ending at the time. In fact, I don’t think I fully “got” it until I read the sequel, Lot’s Daughter, in college.

Despite the point of the story going so far over my head that it was likely in Low Earth Orbit, Lot sparked an interest in fictional depictions of nuclear war and led to me seeking out other examples of the subgenre, which eventually led me to Harlan Ellison’s A Boy and His Dog (as collected in The Beast That Shouted Love at the Heart of the World). Like with Lot a lot of the story went over my head, but I was caught up by the world Ellison created. In part, I think, because it reminded me of other post-apocalyptic worlds I was exploring at the time.

Navel-Gazing:

Keep in mind, I was very much at an age where I reading indiscriminately and not everything I got my grubby little hands on was a classic work of science fiction with literary aspirations. [5] This was a time in history when paperback originals were readily available on racks at newsstands, drug stores and grocery stores. Even in my hometown, which lacked a McDonalds, let alone a bookstore, there were several stores where a kid with some disposable income could find something to read. There was also a resale store in a nearby town that sold stripped paperbacks (yes, I know reselling stripped paperbacks is awful and horrible but as a teenager who wanted cheap books, all I knew was that ten cents a book was a damn good deal).

I don’t remember how old I was when I first discovered that subgenre of cheesy, post-apocalyptic men’s adventure novels that I’ve dubbed Nuke Operas, but I know that the first series I read was either Doomsday Warrior by Ryder Stacy or Endworld by David Robbins. Going by publication dates, which means I discovered these books at some point between 1984-1985, or when I was around 14 or 15. (One of the nice things about being born in 1970, it makes the mathematics of my personal timeline a whole heck of a lot easier).

You would think that reading about the world being destroyed would have ramped up my anxiety but I don’t recall that it did. I think the reasons for that are two-fold. For one thing, I wasn’t reading a lot of these books – I didn’t have the access or the disposable income to be able to buy them when they were new and the resale shop wasn’t getting them consistently.

For another, there was a strange kind of comfort in reading these stories. The idea that survival after a nuclear was possible, even if that survival likely wouldn’t be easy, was strangely soothing. Also, the cheesier books were exactly what they were supposed to be: entertaining adventures that expected you to sit back, relax and enjoy the ride, nothing more, nothing less.

I stopped reading nuke operas shortly before I went off to college in 1988 mainly because of a lack of access and a lack of interest. While I was in college, the Cold War ended and I didn’t think about World War III or those cheesy paperbacks of my childhood until about 2009 when I was walking through a Barnes and Noble and saw a familiar looking series title: Endworld: The Fox Run by David Robbins. I picked up a copy, thinking it’d be fun to revisit those cheesy days of yore.

And it was. And it wasn’t. The book was definitely still cheesy and kind of fun, but there were things missing from the story. Or, more correctly, there were things that I noticed now that I didn’t – even couldn’t – have noticed back when I first encountered these books. Some things, like slipshod world building, could be forgiven – after all, these books were meant to be the literary equivalent of a Syfy channel original movie, not a textbook on post-nuclear survival. Other things, like the casual racism and sexism, were less easily overlooked.

Being a writer, I decided I was going to write my own version of a cheesy post-apocalyptic men’s adventure novel (I hadn’t coined “nuke opera” back then), but I’d write the sort of story that I wish my younger self would have been able to find. One with worldbuilding that made sense and that featured female characters in roles other than victim/prize for the hero. And that still had mutants and silly, super-scientific things because, c’mon, you have to have fun, right? [6]

Of course, to be able to understand a genre, I’d need to read more than just one book, right? I’d need a decent sample size to get a handle on common tropes and to find things I would want to riff on and play with. So I decided to collect examples of every cheesy post-apocalyptic men’s adventure series from this time period. That this would also mean I could delay actually writing the project was just a side bonus and purely unintentional. Honest.

Checking out used book stores and hunting online, I managed to collect examples from roughly 30 different series, hunting down at least the first book in each series. In some cases, especially when a series was only 3-5 books long, I picked up all of them. In one case, that of Ryder Stacy’s Doomsday Warrior, I not only have all nineteen books in the series but also have all nineteen audiobook adaptations done by Graphic Audio (A Movie In Your Mind). [7]

I also did some digging into critiques or studies of this genre of fiction, but didn’t find much. The closest thing I found to a review of nuke operas was in Paul Brians’ Nuclear Holocausts: Atomic War in Fiction, which is an online edition of the book version, which was published in 1987 and is now out of print. Brians’ bibliography of atomic war in fiction helped me track down series titles and was and is an indispensable resources. As are Brians other atomic war related research, available at Nuclear War & Disaster-related Materials.

I’ve also found series and reviews of individual titles at review sites dedicated to pulp novels/paperback originals. Some of my favorites include:
Unfortunately, I’ve never been able to find the resource I really want, which is a study/deep dive into Nuke Opera books along the lines of Bill Pronzini’s book-length studies of “alternative classic” (i.e. bad) mystery novels (Gun in Cheek, Son of Gun in Cheek) and Westerns (Six-Gun in Cheek). Not to mention, Grady Hendrix’s look at horror paperbacks in the 1970s-1980s ,Paperbacks from Hell and his reviews at Book Reviews of the Damned. Or Gabrielle Moss’s Paperback Crush. And, last but by no means least, Beyond Heaving Bosoms, Smart Bitches, Trashy Books’ review of the romance novel genre.

So, since I can’t find what I want, I’m going to have to make it myself. That’s what this blog series is going to be. Toward that end, here’s an incomplete listing of what I want to do with these blog posts:
  • First and Foremost: is to review several books and stories that are linked by a common theme, including some that I feel haven’t gotten the kind of critical attention they really should have.

  • Secondly: To talk about the history of nuclear weapons, civil defense and popular culture’s responses to the possibility of World War III.

  • Thirdly: to actually accomplish something I’ve been wanting to do for years now: produce a final product. I’ve been working on writing, focusing on fiction and have yet to actually finish anything. This year, I’m going to take a stab at working on a non-fiction project and setting smaller, more accomplishable goals in hopes of achieving something.
Toward that end, I’m planning on attempting at least one post a week. Some posts will be book reviews (and some of those will be multi-part); others will be on aspects of Cold War history. I’ll also be looking at books that aren’t themselves nuke operas, but which I feel are important to the subject.

Footnotes:

  • [1]:Please note: my recollections of this time are not exact; unfortunately, I was not one of those kids who kept a diary, so don’t expect documentary-style accuracy when it comes to my personal recollections. When it comes to actual historical things that I can look up, the accuracy is going to be a lot better.

  • [2]: I changed the names of my teachers because I’m from a really small town and it just feels kind of squicky to out my teachers, even if I’m talking about them positively. The names I’ve given them are references to famous historians because I’m that kind of nerd. Though, how cool would it have been to have a history teacher named Herodotus?)

  • [3]: I’d voted for him in my first-grade class’s mock presidential election back in 1976 because Carter liked peanuts and I liked peanuts. (I was six.)

  • [4]: When I was around fifteen or so, I did become a lot more anxious about nuclear war and the possibility of it actually happening. Though, I do think that was more in response to other things going on in my life at that time that were making me anxious. Kind of like, I couldn’t think about those other things, so all the anxiety got directed toward nuclear war because that was something I could deal with more easily.Oddly enough, I can actually remember when those fears went away. It was while I was watching Spies Like Us (1985). The movie was a comedy featuring Chevy Chase and Dan Aykroyd as bumbling spies who accidentally launch a nuclear weapon but end up saving the day because the plot demanded it. It wasn’t a good movie; it’s most lasting claim to fame might be the fact it was a plot point in an episode of Family Guy back in 2009. But, for some reason, seeing the characters prevent World War III helped ease my fears and I walked out of the theatre feeling as if a weight had been lifted off my shoulders. Not bad for a film that only has a 32% on Rotten Tomatoes.

  • [5]: For a given definition of “classics” that is meant to draw a distinction between stories/novels that were written for the literary side of the genre market, as opposed to stories/novels like Endworld and Doomsday Warrior that were written to be cheap, fast entertainment.

  • [6]: If you’re interested in this still-theoretical book, check out my Defcon tag, wherein you can see a lot of navel gazing on the subject of writing/typing up various drafts; the work is, like most of my fiction, currently a Work In Progress.

  • [7]: My List of Things to Buy When I Win The Lottery, Despite Not Playing the Lottery includes obtaining the Graphic Audio version of entire run of the long-running Deathlands nuke opera series, which ran to 125 books in print and is being continued by Graphic Audio as audiobook exclusives. Currently, the series is at 136 titles and is available for ‘only’ $3,681.64 in the MP3 CD format. Y’know, if anyone would like to get me a 50th birthday present, just sayin’.
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Originally posted at: Nostalgia, Nuclear War and Navel-Gazing: An Introduction to NUKE OPERA 2020, January 8, 2020


dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
 

The writing continues apace – albeit a slow pace (at least until today), but still, slow progress is still progress. Word counts are, thus far:

  • Day 6 (August 11): 134 words
  • Day 7 (August 13): 348 words
  • Day 8 (August 14): 146 words
  • Day 9 (August 15): 1,576 words

A lot of those words aren’t narrative, but are instead notes to myself for the next time I get the chance to sit down and write for a length of time.  I’m still working hard on the first and third scenes for Chapter Zero. Currently, I’m focusing more on the first scene, since that’s the antagonist’s scene and he’s the character I’m having the hardest time writing because, while he is a canon character, he didn’t get much screen time in the comics (not to mention, I haven’t read those comics). So, I’m doing a lot of heavy lifting on him.

But I’ve hit on some stuff that I think works well for a motivation so I’m looking forward to making some real progress. Onward!

Addendum 8/15/19 @ 1722: Yes, this addendum is in the right spot – I have the first scene of Chapter Zero written! It’s not perfect, but it’s something I can build from. In addition, I’ve started on scene three, which features the Combaticons and should, hopefully, be much easier to write.

The fact that a lot of what I’ve written has been notes rather than narrative means that my word counts are kinda/sorta meaningless at this point. Toward that end, I’ve altered the spreadsheet I’ve been using to track my writing to reflect the fact that I’m not so much writing the story this month as I am rewriting/refining the story.

Now, back to writing about Blast Off freaking out from North Atlantic hurricane induced claustrophobia.

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Addendum 8/15/19 @ 1623:  I just spent the better part of I don’t know how long exactly but probably over half an hour trying to figure out a rough idea of average Transformer heights in order to come up with a way to wrap my head around Cybertronian units of measurement (in this case, length).  I ended up creating a spreadsheet and coming up with the realization that, at least in *my* fic ‘verse, the equivalent of a Cybertronian “foot” is approximately the same as a human yard or meter.

This is all because I want to make sure that I get an off-handed reference to where the Decepticon Undersea base is located right – for a definition of right that means “my numbers-addled brain will let me stop obsessing over this stupid detail and move on already!

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Addendum: 8/15/19 @ 1704: Second verse, similar but not exactly identical to the first – just figured out the more or less, close enough for government work location of the Decepticon Undersea base, then used a longitude/latitude converter to figure out the distance between it and the location of the Combaticons’ attack. Again, this is a whole lot of work for a relatively minor detail but figuring it out makes it easier for me to continue on with the writing.

Heck, yesterday, I changed the name of a location and suddenly, the thing that had been blocking me was gone and I could continue on. It’s weird and annoying and sometimes, it’s just downright cool.

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Personal Aside: It’s things like this that are helping to convince me that I have OCD – not internet OCD (“Oh, haha, I’m so OCD, it bugs me that it’s not written as CDO! LOL!”) but actual OCD. I saw an article or a post on Facebook or something that talked about how OCD is actually an expression of anxiety and started doing some research on it and oh holy crap, does a lot of what I’ve seen sound like me.  I’m not going to go into detail here but apparently, one of my compulsions is needing to have relatively insignificant things right or at least straight in my mind before I can continue writing. There are other things that aren’t relevant to this but I’ll talk about those on another occasion.  

I’m looking into getting an official diagnosis as well, because I’m kinda tired of living with this untreated.

dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
The actual writing part of the process of Chapter Zero continues! A lot of the writing is me making notes to myself, but I do have some actual narrative bits in there too and I'm pretty happy with those.

Day 4: I managed about 124 words, most of which was centered on the scene at the Joe/Autobot party and which is going to need editing. I'm pretty proud of this bit though:

“I’m telling you, that last battle just doesn’t make sense!” Bluestreak was saying as Hawk went past. “There’s no way a buncha fuzzy-wuzzy teddy bears should have been able to take out trained soldiers!”

“I’m with the Z-car on this,” Clutch said, leaning companionably against Bluestreak’s leg, a beer in one hand. “It’s just not believable.”

“So, what? You’re saying short guys can’t kick aft and take names?” Swerve said. “Besides, the Ewoks were on their home turf! Of course they’re gonna know the territory better’n a buncha evil-minded interlopers! C’mon, Mainframe, back me up, yeah?”

“He’s got a point,” Mainframe said, with a shrug. “Look at some of our wars here; Custer’s forces got taken out because bows are better at shooting around cover than guns are. Plus, during the Winter War, the Finns took out Soviet tanks with Molotov cocktails and logs. When you get down to it, the idea that a less technologically advanced group can’t defeat a more technologically advanced one, is egotism, pure and simple.”

“You’re only saying that because you guys are the Ewoks!” Bluestreak countered, a grin on his face.

“Damn right!” Clutch didn’t seem to see the hypocrisy in switching sides mid-debate. Pushing off Bluestreak, he raised a fist in the air and bellowed out a war cry that cut through the music and conversation going on around them. “Yub nub!”

“Yub nub!” chorused every Joe and a few of the Autobots’ human allies within earshot of Clutch.



Day 5: Today was the day I sketched some nice broad strokes on the other two scenes. The Combaticon scene was, naturally enough, the easiest of the two but I came up with some good ideas for motivations for the main antagonist of the story so I am pleased. I need to fine-tune those details, so no sharing any bits yet. Hopefully soon, though.

For the moment, I'm going to stop working and try to figure out what I want to take home for dinner.

Later, gators!
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
The actual writing of Chapter Zero has started! It was a slow grind, but I have made a start and I mean to continue with said start tomorrow! I switched the order of the scenes I came up with yesterday and figured out locations and times/dates for the three scenes.

I wrote a bit of the scene at the Joe/Autobot end of exercise party that's a good start. Hoping to get more done tomorrow.
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
I've been working on trying to figure out what Joes and Autobots I want working together -- toward that end, I've made up about half a dozen spreadsheets aimed at figuring out which characters were likely to exist at the time when my story is set -- originally, it was just circa 1993; now, the majority of the story takes place over the course of Tuesday, April 13, 1993.

Note: There's no significance to the date, beyond I wanted a time of year that doesn't have any real significance to it. I actually went out of my way to check to make sure the date wasn't actually significant here in the Real World.

I've managed to narrow down the Joes to about 153 names, so I can pretty easily grab a character name if I need one. Not all characters will be appearing in the fic, I just wanted a resource for ease of brainstorming.

As far as figuring out what Autobots would be part of the training, I started listing characters and ended up realizing that chances are pretty good that most of the Autobots are going to want to play with train with the Joes. Again, not everyone is going to be shown, but having a list of names to grab is helpful.

I've also gotten some mental images that I'd like to do something more with. Things like, Snake-Eyes doing tai chi with Groove and/or First Aid; Seaspray and Cutter hanging out; Arcee and the female Joes bonding over their shared experiences as women in predominately male groups (using the idea that Arcee is a trans femme and that she, unlike the female Joes, hasn't had to fight as hard to be accepted as a warrior because she's female "I actually get more grief for being pink; it scares some people.")

Unfortunately, none of these things have a place in this story, so I'm filing them away for the time being.

I'm working on plotting out what I'm currently calling Chapter Zero (which will become the new Chapter One, once it's done). I've decided that it should be at least three scenes long, each one setting up aspects of the later story. One with the Autobots and Joes, celebrating the end of successful training with a party; another showing the Combaticons trying to tough out being stuck in the Decepticon Undersea Base; and a third setting up the reason why our antagonist wants to destroy the Joes. Something that was kind of lacking from the original story. Eh-heh. Oops. The things we learn over the course of a decade...

I'm planning on starting writing tomorrow. I'll keep y'all posted.
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
Today has been a day of doing more thinking than actually writing. Mainly because I have determined that I need to flesh out some aspects of the story, specifically which Autobots and which Joes would be teaming up together for the joint GI Joe/Autobot training exercises that help spark the action of the story.

Some characters are pretty much givens, but since I've decided to add a chapter that goes into more detail about the Joe/Autobot team-up, I want some more names.

Thankfully, GI Joe and Transformers fandoms are the sort where finding lists of information on characters, like ranks and specialties is pretty freaking easy. And, thanks to my newfound love of spreadsheets, I've been working on a spreadsheet to help me figure out what Joes I want.

The Autobots are a little easier -- the Protectobots are a given, probably also Jazz, Inferno, Red Alert (albeit with some reluctance due to him being concerned about humans learning how to fight and defeat Cybertronians), possibly also some of the minibots and some of the standard bots I do have a mental image of Arcee and the female Joes getting on like a house a'fire. And today, the image of Snake-Eyes and First Aid doing tai chi came to mind.

If anybody has any suggestions for Autobots (or Joes for that matter), drop 'em in the comments!
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
I'm going to start working on the next draft of Common Cause tomorrow, mainly by doing a read through of the current draft, making notes and preparing for another go-through. This time around, I don't think I'm going to do a total rewrite (i.e. retyping the manuscript from scratch). Instead, I think I'm going to focus on editing this newest draft and making changes as I go.

This is where the rubber is really going to meet the road in terms of finally finishing this story. My fingers are crossed, wish me luck folks!
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
General Blathering: It’s been another goodly stretch of days since the last time I had the chance to sit down and work on Common Cause, though not as long a gap as the one between Days Seven and Eight. Part of the reason for the gap this time around is because my work schedule has changed again. Long story short is, I am working the early morning shift at work, so I’m having to acclimatize myself to that. So far, so good. This is (hopefully) going to be a temporary change.


So, today, I came to one of the local library branches where I like to go and do my marathon typing sessions. I tend to vary which ones I go to, because of some weird discomfort with the idea of being seen as a regular. Today, that kind of got shot in the foot, since the library I chose was having an emergency evacuation drill.


I showed up at the library, found the computer I wanted to use, settled in and decided to go to the restroom before I got stuck in for the day. After the bathroom, I put some money in the pop machine to get a cold and tasty beverage (the fact that I can buy a pop at the library and drink it in the library is still just a mind-blowing thing). It was right after I put my money in the machine that a guy came over and said something to the effect of “We’re having an emergency evacuation, we need you to leave the building.”


Of course, I’d put a five dollar bill in the machine. I hit the change return button, hoping that the machine would give me the bill back. It didn’t. So I stood there, waiting for 20 quarters to be spit out and watching the guy checking the bathrooms. I gathered my change, went over to the computer station where I’d logged in, logged out and left the building while the guy was informing other people that they also had to leave.


It was around this point I heard him say ‘drill’ to some other patrons and was like, “…ok, either he didn’t say ‘drill’ to me or my still sleepy brain just drifted over the word ‘drill’ in favor of focusing on ‘emergency evacuation.’


Once I got outside, I ended up following some of the library employees who were going to their safe meeting space (mainly because I didn’t know where else to go and I wanted to know when I’d be able to go back into the library and I figured if anyone would know, it’d be the librarians).


It wasn’t a long wait; I got a nice little walk out of the experience and the librarians were like, “Hey, how’s it going?” Of course, now I think my attempts at remaining semi-anonymous/under the radar are kinda shot, but it’s all good.


Actual Revision Information: Once the evacuation drill was over, I came back to the same station I’d logged into before and logged back in. Since the computers keep track of how much time you use, I found out that the whole exercise took about 4 minutes. Fortunately, I had over 590 minutes left (seriously, this particular library system allows you 660 minutes of computer usage per day; it’s crazy! Crazy awesome!).


Once again, sitting down and doing the actual typing/revising/writing of the story is the most difficult part of the day. It’s especially difficult for this chapter because, as I’ve said previously, this is where I need to tie all the plot threads I’ve been spinning into a cohesive whole (aka the thing I’ve been trying off and on (mostly off) for the last thirteen years).


One thing I’ve learned as I’ve been doing this rewrite is that there are some problems with internal consistency that were either in this story to begin with or that I’ve managed to put in during the rewrite because I’ve altered some earlier points. Because of this, there are now some places where I’m going to need to edit and/or alter earlier elements of the story and there are other parts where I’m going to have to write new bits, whole cloth, to help this piece hang together.


None of this is necessarily particularly difficult, but it’s more than a bit frustrating. At the moment, I’m focusing mostly on typing up Chapter Five, but including notes about where I’m going to want to change things when I go back through for the next series of rewriting and revision. Which is going to start, if the typing goes well, on August 1st.


Well, huh….: And, we’re done. As of 1906 on Tuesday, July 30, 2019, I have finished typing up an entire draft of Common Cause. The total word count – which includes a lot of notes to myself for the next round of the rewriting process, is 25,064 words. This story isn’t complete, not by a long stretch. I’ve got at least one new chapter that needs to be written and may end up inserting a new chapter near the end, which may become the new epilogue with the old epilogue either being chucked out entirely or turned into epigraphs on the previous chapters. Right now, I’m done for the day and I’m looking forward to going home and eating some delicious food with my girlfriend.


And figuring out just WTF I’m going to be doing with myself tomorrow….


W00t!
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Prompt 7: Be Your Own Light:


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Ok, the idea for this prompt is to [R]eflect and share what things you love about yourself. with the idea being that to be kinder to others, we must first be kind to ourselves.

Which is a great idea, in theory. It’s when I sit here in front of the screen, with my fingers on the keyboard, trying to come up with things that I actually like about my actual self that I find myself going, “Welp.”

Welp. (See?!) Let’s get stuck in and see what happens.

So, I did what I almost always do when I’m faced with a writing challenge: turned to researching the subject to see what I could come up with! In this case, rather than Googling “What’s so cool about me?” I went through the archives of my DW journal because back in the day I did one of those “Please complement me!” memes and I figured I could see what other people liked about me and if I agree with them.

Out of the four comments on the meme, three of them talked about me being a good writer – which, yeah, I actually do agree with. I could be better, for sure – but find me any creative person who doesn’t think they could stand to improve upon their craft. Reading over some of my older fics leaves me with only a minimal bit of cringe balanced out by more of a sense of “Huh, this could use work but I like this!” Then again, I wrote most of my fics between the ages of 36-38, so I’m not exactly looking at true juvenilia here.

Things I like about my writing:

I do dialogue well. In fact, dialogue is one of the easiest things for me to write, especially if I get a character’s voice in my head. I generally think of scenes in terms of dialogue.

I get my facts straight I’m not kidding about starting just about every writing project, no matter the length, by doing research. I blame my upbringing: if we had questions about stuff, we were encouraged to go to the encyclopedia or the big ass unabridged dictionary to see if we could find the answer. These days, having things like Google and Wikipedia at my fingertips makes looking stuff up so much faster and easier. The sheer volume of stuff you can access is just…*happy sigh*.

I’m funny, not just in my writing but IRL too.

I try to stay in character Ok, this applies more to fanfic than anything else, but I do try to keep my characters’ behavior/reactions/etc. in line with their canonical behavior. I also try to do the same for my original characters which is at one and the same time easier and more difficult to do.

Non-Writerly Stuff I Like About Me:
Ok, this is where I’m stuck going “Welp” again because I’m not always my own biggest fan. I like to think I’m nice and that I try to help people out when I can – but then, in the back of my mind are all the times that I didn’t help someone out when I could have. Or should have. Or didn’t do as much as I could/should have done. Which is, at least partially, me being harder on myself than I should. But not entirely.

I’m good at Excel. For years, my girlfriend and I have had a running joke about the leader of the Combaticons, Onslaught, being obsessed with spreadsheets (because part of his character is that he loves organizing plans and strategies and tactics). Recently, due to my job, I’ve started using Excel more and I can see the attraction. You can do so much with Excel! It’s just so awesome for organizing information and for doing calculations and…*ahem* well, yes. I like Excel.

I’m easy-going and I can go with the flow. Pretty much, so long as I know what’s expected to be happening, I can pretty much handle what comes next.

Ok, I think this is enough self-appreciation for the moment. Don’t want me getting a big head, after all.

This was a lot of fun; thanks to the organizers!
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
Due to a series of real life kerfuffles, including car repairs, computer repairs and a busted air conditioning unit the night before one of the worst heatwaves I've ever been through, work on Common Cause got delayed for a while, but I've finally started Chapter Five! I managed to get six scenes done (out of, I think, an original total of around fifteen to eighteen). It was slow going, especially for the first scene but once I got past it, I was able to get into a groove.

The running total for the entire fic is now 21,248 words (123.74% of the official original word count).
Chapter Five at 2,748 words or about 72.63% of the official original word count for Chapter Five.
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Prompt 6: Share Fannish Collections:

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Some cool things of mine – no pictures as of yet, but that may change over time.

Transformers-wise, I have a T-shirt from BotCon 2000, which was held in Ft. Wayne, Indiana and was the first Transformers convention I ever went to. It was a heck of a lot of fun but not my best Transformers convention experience. That goes to the convention, also in Ft. Wayne, that I went to in either 2001 or 2002, where my girlfriend and I went and because we didn’t have tickets, hung out in the hotel lobby – where we actually got to listen in on an interview with Sky Byte’s voice actor. And because of some shenanigans and friends showing mercy on us, we also got to watch the episodes of Robots in Disguise that hadn’t been released in the US (or hadn’t been as of that time). Which meant we got to see the RiD version of the Combaticons in action.

I’ve also got a couple copies of ConQuest, a Transformers fanzine published by Raksha, a Transformers BNF from back in the day. She was known back then for being pro-Decepticon, seeing them as the misunderstood party in the Autobot/Decepticon war, hating Beast Wars/Beast Machines and organizing the first BotCon in 1995.

One of the copies of Con-Quest that I have is #29, the ‘zine where my first ever Transformers fanfic was published. (and which can be read here: Realization *Squee!*

Another fandom of mine is post-apocalyptic men’s adventure novels from the 1980s, most of which are centered on nuclear war as the source of the apocalypse. (I've also got a wonking stack of non-fiction books about nuclear war, many of which are from the 1980s.) I have examples of 30 different series – in most cases, I have the first book of the series. In a few cases, I have the entire series (usually in the case where the series is 3-5 books). In one case, I have not only the entirety of Doomsday Warrior, a 19 book series in print, I also have it in audiobook format. Specifically, in GraphicAudio format, which leads to another fandom of mine!

GraphicAudio is a company that creates audiobooks, primarily for long-haul truckers. Their tagline is “A Movie in Your Mind!” and they come pretty darn close to achieving that. Their books are performed by a cast with a narrator and includes sound effects and music. They do a lot of westerns but also a lot of science fiction, fantasy, comic book novel adaptations and post-apocalyptic mens’ adventure series, like Doomsday Warrior, Deathlands (the longest-running post-apocalyptic mens’ adventure series with over 125 books) and Outlanders (sequel series to Deathlands and also a long-runner with over 50 books).
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Prompt 5: Wish Fulfilment:

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The idea behind this challenge, the idea is/was to look around and find someone else's wish to fulfill for them. This is my wishlist for folks who might be looking for something.

Really, all I'd like is for folks to say howdy.

Ok, also, if you'd like to read my fics and leave a comment, that would be awesome. My stuff can be found at:
kepulver @ Fanfiction.Net or at [personal profile] dunmurderin. The fandoms I've written in include Transformers (mostly related to the G1 cartoon/comics), GI Joe (both Real American Hero and Sigma Six), Jem and the Holograms, Star Wars (based primarily in the Clone Wars cartoon and the Republic Commandos books/video game universe) and some X-Men: Age of Apocalypse stories.

Actually, if you read anything of mine and leave a comment on it, that would be awesome! I have a non-fannish journal over at Doomsday Writer @ Wordpress.com.
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Prompt 4: Fanwork Recommendations:

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Ok, it’s been a while since I’ve delved deeply into fanworks so some of these recommendations are going to be from back in the day. Still, they’re good. Enjoy! 

Other Peoples’ Stuff: 

Don't Quack, Don't Tell by Kim McFarland A Darkwing Duck fic that was the first fanfic I remember reading back in the day and the fic that changed my mind about fanfic being a bad thing. 

The other one was an Andy Griffith Show/Highlander crossover where Andy finds out he and Barney Fife are Highlanders. It was an absolutely brilliant mix of both universes and even managed to explain how Andy had a son by including a certain hardware store owner from Milwaukee. Unfortunately, I can’t find a link to it. 

G-Man by KJG Transformers; "Tailgate is sent on a spy mission" -- this was published back in January 1999, so it depicts the pre-IDW/MTMTE version of Tailgate. it's still cute! 

I Hear the Rotors Still by Blinky the Tree Frog An X-Men fic that crosses over with a popular 1980s show. Yes, I'm being deliberately vague about what show it is because I don't want to spoil the surprise. 

The Way Is Shut by The Dark Scribbler -A World War Z fic about the first recon mission to North Korea. The news is not good. But the story? Is well done and very much in the tone of the book. 

Bad Cop by Rebecca Hb Transformers; Brawl gets a new alt mode, much to Swindle's dismay. In fact, do yourself a favor and check out Rebecca's other fics. 

Commentary by Adrian Tullberg An Marvel fic that depicts an episode of the Daily Show, after the events of the Marvel Civil War. From 2006, so pre-dates the movie. 

Rite of Passage, No Left Turn by The Original Marisa Transformers; Spike goes for his driver's license. It's a one shot and it's funny. 

Things That Are Broken by Seiberwing Transformers fic, set in the Cybertron/Galaxy Force. Features Ransack and Crumplezone in a bittersweet story of love and jealousy. 

A Loving Relationship by Knave Iespyk GI Joe; a fic that settles the Duke/Scarlett/Snake-Eyes love triangle in a (to me) perfectly acceptable way. 

Insecticomics by Wayward Martian Subtitled: “Batter Dipping Your Childhood”, the Insecticomics were photocomics made using Transformers toys and other props. Per the creator: “In the context of the Insecticomics, the characters are not toys, but actual Transformers. Just really small and living in a human's apartment. Unless they're in the suburbs of Pollyhex. The fact that they're mass-produced and sold as toys by humans doesn't bother them, and toy stores are an accepted way to increase the size of one's army. They also never question why there's characters from pretty much every generation running around, or how, say, Waspinator and Thrust exist simultaneously. Or why Vector Prime can teleport but he carries a rubber sword. 

Basically, the whole thing doesn't make much sense and 'internal continuity' are words unknown. 

The Insecticomics have ended but the archives will remain up for your wasting of time.


You should also check out Wayward Martian’s Transformers fan art and fan fiction at her main page: 
In Space, No One Can Hear Starscream

Shameless Plugs

Ok, now I’m going to recommend some of my stuff that I’m particularly proud of. I’m linking an equal number of fics in order to be shameless, but fair. 

Best Day Ever Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles; set after the 2007 movie and based on my experiences in tech support. 

Con Job Transformers; features Bobby Bolivia, Bernie Mac’s character from the 2007 movie and my favorite Combaticon, Swindle. 

Never Forgotten Star Wars: Republic Commandos; spoilers for the Republic Commandos video game. 

As Ye Sow Star Wars Republic Commandos (specifically the novels by Karen Traviss) and Star Wars Clone Wars cartoon crossover. 

Even a Broken Clock X-Men: Age of Apocalypse fic featuring Sabretooth. This is my attempt at explaining why Sabretooth joined the good guys in the Age of Apocalypse. Don’t ask me why I like X-Men: Age of Apocalypse as much as I do, I just do. 

Witnessing Transformers; my attempt at a non-Western style marriage ceremony for Transformers. This was written back in the days before romantic relationships and pair bonding were canonical things. 

Shambleau A Transformers/Northwest Smith crossover. Vortex, of the Combaticons, runs into a different kind of alien menace while the team is on Monacus. 

End of the World Party Transformers; takes place 11 million years prior to the start of the G1 series, shortly after the events in the episode Forever is a Long Time Coming. Kup goes to a party and has a really wild time. 

Stargazing Transformers; Optimus and Ironhide share a moment while watching the stars on their new home of Earth. 

Realization Transformers; the first fanfic I ever wrote/published online. Swindle deals with the aftermath of what he did to his teammates in B.O.T. (he sold their damaged bodies for parts). 

The Seven Ages of Man: Tailgate A series of fics looking at the life of Tailgate (this version is different from the one seen in the Transformers: More Than Meets The Eye/Lost Light comics from IDW). 


dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)

 Chapter Four is done! Basic bookkeeping fapping about word counts away!

Total word count for Common Cause is now at 18,464 words, which puts me at 107.53% of the original 17,171 word count (admittedly, 'original word count' in this sense means 'word count of the draft I'm working from and have decided is the source material because of reasons). 

Chapter Four is now 5,470 words or 139.01% of the original 3,935 word count. The other chapters shook out like this:

  • Chapter One went from 2,713 words to 4,239 words for a 156.25% increase, 
  • Chapter Two: 2,542 words to 3,576 words (140.68% increase)
  • Chapter Three: 3,804 words to 5,179 words (136.15% increase)


Chapter Five, which was written back in 2007, but which has never been posted, is coming up next. I'm probably not going to start working on it today because I have to leave for work fairly soon and I'm at a pretty decent stopping point for the day. I'm also thinking, I might not work on it until next week, when I'll have a couple days where I can spend more time working without having to worry about making sure I leave in time to get to work.

 So, since I’m not wanting to get immersed in writing Chapter Five, I’m going to immerse myself in projections about how long Chapter Five might end up being. These projections are rough estimates, based on the average percentage increase in the previous four chapters (approximately 140.61%):

  • Chapter Five – Original word count: 3,935 words
  • Chapter Five – Estimated word count, once revised: 5,390 words

It’s likely that Chapter Five is going to end up longer. It may also end up being split into two chapters. Originally, I’d planned that Common Cause would be six chapters and an epilogue, so that would be within the spirit of the original draft.

There's also an epilogue which is the puniest of the series:

  • Epilogue – Original word count: 344 words (seriously, there's not much to it)
  • Epilogue – Estimated word count, once revised: 484 words.

The Epilogue though, will probably end up being either higher, since I want to add more to it, or shorter because I might just drop it, since I’m not sure how much it’s going to add to the story. I do kinda like it though.

Rambling Thoughts:

I’m anxious about starting Chapter Five. This is where all the threads I’ve spun out over the last 18,000 words need to come together into a coherent and satisfying whole. Now, this is a draft so I’m not expecting to write perfection the first time out, but I do have to make things make sense and at least lay a groundwork for making further improvements to the story.

It also doesn’t help that this is a story that has remained unfinished for twelve years (thirteen, if you go back to when I first started the story). It’s become something of a bête noir, as I’ve mentioned in other posts. The fact that this story has remained unfinished for so long has, despite me knowing this is ridiculous and superstitious and highly illogical, left me with the feeling that until it is done, I cannot expect to be able to finish any other longer, more serious work.

So far, the rewrite has been going well. Like, really well. It’s only taken me about seven days to get to this point, with most chapters taking between one to two days to finish. Chapter Five will likely take me longer, even if I start writing it tomorrow, I’m expecting to have to put in three to five days’ worth of work into it.  Because of how my work week and my girlfriend’s work week shake out, the nice thing is that I can spend my days off at the library plugging away, listening to YouTube videos and occasionally people watching.

One of the things that I think has helped a lot with this revision – other than the fact that I’m working from previously written material -- is that I’m not spending every single day writing it. I’m taking breaks in between and giving myself time for my mental batteries to recharge. How well this will work for fiction that hasn’t already been written will remain to be seen, but I am currently, cautiously optimistic.

 

 

dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
Very, very quick post because I have to hightail it to work here in about five minutes:

Chapter Four is almost done! I am one scene away from finishing it! I managed to write 2,152 words today, bringing my grand total to 17,677 words, putting me at 102.95% of the original work!

I'll get Chapter Four finished tomorrow and get started on Chapter Five -- which is when we're going to be going into terra incognita territory. I mean, I have the original chapter I wrote but I'm thinking Chapter Five is where I'm going to end up doing a lot more heavy lifting in terms of writing new words.

More later!
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)
Chapter Three is done and I am on to Chapter Four – which was the last chapter I posted. It’s the longest of the original chapters and it’s where the majority of the action takes place so I’m expecting it to take a few days’ worth of writing to finish it.

Word count thus far is: 15,525 words or 90.41% of the original word count of 17,171 words. At the rate I’m going, I’m expecting to hit 17,171 words soon. Possibly even tomorrow if I seriously pound the keyboard before work.

My initial plan was that the rewrite would maybe double the original word count – which would technically be 34,342, but let’s round that up to 34,343 because palindromes are the bestest thing ever! Now, I don’t know if I’ll get it that high, but I’ll settle for something closer to 25,752 which is slightly under one and a half times the original length.

Really, the palindromic numbers are just a way of setting an interesting goal. The story will be as long as it needs to be.
dunmurderin: (Combaticons!)

Chapter Three is underway!  I managed 3,710 words today, which brings my grand total up to 11,525 words or about 67.12% of the original word count.  I didn’t get quite as far along as I’d wanted to, but considering I set my daily goal at something like, 7720 words, I think my eyes were bigger than my stomach, so to speak.


dunmurderin: a stone circle in the foreground; the sunrise in the background (sunshine challenge icons)

Sunshine Challenge: Day Three:

Prompt 3: Canon Recommendations:

For more on the [community profile] sunshine_challenge, click on the link. 

I tried to give a few examples for each of the categories suggested on the main post. I stopped myself once this hit over 1000 words – believe me, I could go on.

Sorry for the lack of links, but all of these things are fairly easily Googled. I might break down and go back and add in links later.

 I hope you find something you might enjoy!

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Movies:

  • Streets of Fire is an alternate universe science fictionish movie with a kick-ass rock sound track. It’s a 1980s flick and it’s definitely worth checking out.
  • Red Dawn, the 1984 movie and ONLY the 1984 movie, is worth checking out. It’s not as jingoistic as you’d think – I mean, it’s jingoistic, but the invading Russians and their allies aren’t portrayed as entirely unsympathetic. You can read more of my thoughts on both movies here: Red Dawn (1984) and Red Dawn (2012) -- There will be Spoiler

Books:

If you like time travel, you should definitely check out the Chronicles of St. Mary’s by Jodi Taylor. They have a great take on time travel studying history in contemporary time (they have a costume department that makes period clothes!), plus an engaging cast of characters.

For military fantasy/science fiction/horror, the Joe Ledger series by Jonathan Maberry comes up with plausibly ‘real world’ explanations for things like zombies, vampires, aliens, etc. What drew me to the books was the fact that the main character, Joe Ledger, is a total bad ass who is in therapy because of the violent things that have happened in his past (and present). The audiobooks are read by Ray Porter, who actually was the reason I got interested in the series and have stuck with it all the way through.  For stories set in the actual military that allow the supernatural to actually be supernatural, check out Seal Team 666 books by William Ochoa.

Also! The President’s Vampire series by Christopher Farnsworth – the premise takes its premise from a historical footnote and turns it into something amazingly awesome. If you enjoy audiobooks, these were narrated by Bronson Pinchot who is one of those voice actors who does all the voices and does them well.

If you like Cthulu and spies with a healthy dash of computer sciences, the Laundry Files by Charles Stross are super-good.

For a humorous romance series that blends historical fiction and present day, the Secret History of the Pink Carnation series by Laura Willig. Added bonus: it’s essentially a Scarlet Pimpernel fanfic, in the sense that it takes place in a world where the Pimpernel was an historical figure and inspired other Regency era flower themed adventurers/spies. And while you don’t have to have read the Scarlet Pimpernel before you read the SHotPC books, I highly recommend reading it at some point. It’s really, really good!

Cozy mystery fan? The Meg Langford series of books combines a large and eccentric cast of characters along with a plausible amateur sleuth and periodically punny bird titles.

TV Series:

  • Midsommer Murders is a British series that takes place in a county in England that, were it a real place, would have a murder rate that would make most war zones go “wow, that’s a dangerous place!” The series is about 20 seasons long but since it’s British, that means you’re looking at about 6-8 episodes per season. It’s one of the few shows out there that stands up even after cast changes.
  • Final Space is funny and goofy; if you like Futurama or Rick and Morty, you should give this a go.
  • DC Super Hero Girls This is kind of a high school AU featuring Supergirl, Batgirl, Wonder Woman, Bumblebee, Zatana and Green Lantern as students at Metropolis high school. It’s got very strong “Girl Power!” and the power of friendship vibes to it – which is a feature, not a bug. 

Comic Books: Ok, here’s where I’m gonna let my Transformers fan freak flag fly furiously:

Transformers: More Than Meets the Eye, Transformers: Lost Light, Transformers: Robots in Disguise, and Transformers: Till All Are One – are really good jumping on points if you want to start reading Transformers comics. They’re based in a G1 universe (which means they are based, loosely, in the Transformers universe created back in the 1980s) that does a good job of balancing that which has come before and making the story accessible to new fans.

MTMTE and RID are set at the same time, after the Autobot/Decepticon war has ended, Cybertron has been reborn and everybody’s trying to figure out what the heck to do now that the war that has been their collective raison d'etre has ended. Each series follows different groups of characters through different types of adventures.

Transformers: MTMTE follows the adventures of Rodimus Prime and the crew of the Lost Light as they search for the Knights of Cybertron. (Transformers: Lost Light takes up after More Than Meets the Eye ends).  If you like a kind of rambling, “the journey is what matters!” story that is heavily character driven, you’re gonna like MTMTE/Lost Light.

Transformers: RID takes place on Cybertron and follows the efforts of Bumblebee, Starscream and others as they try to cope with the end of the war and rebuilding a society. This series is particularly interesting because it features “NAILs” (“Non-Aligned Indigenous Lifeforms”) who are Transformers who left Cybertron and have only recently returned to Cybertron. The majority of the NAILs are not particularly fond of either the Autobots or the Decepticons. If you like stories that feature politics and stories that focus on a larger mystery, check out RID.

Transformers: Till All Are One continues with the theme of trying to maintain an uneasy peace on post-war Cybertron – and features Starscream as the ruler of Cybertron. It also heavily features the Combaticons which is part of what endears it to me, especially since they’re being used as something other than a Bruticus delivery service.

One nice feature of these series is that they’ve all ended, so there’s a coherent beginning, middle and end. The downside to these series is that they’ve ended – but, good news again: IDW has rebooted their Transformers comic as of 2018. The new series takes place prior to the start of the Autobot/Decepticon war, which gives us a chance to follow along and see how things are going to go wrong. The series is being put out monthly with a graphic novel scheduled for October, I think. Definitely worth checking out.


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