Great line: Ordinarily, Eric didn’t mind deals with the devil, he just preferred being the devil.
That one's one of my favorites.
I'm not sure of the stretching capacity of the word, but can they be Eurotrash when two are American?
*slips into Marvel No-Prize Mode* Well, going by their attitude, I can see Eric using the term for them because they've been living in Europe and likely picked up the attitude there and Eric probably either doesn't know they're actually from the States or doesn't care that Minx is the only actual European in the group but in all actuality you raise a good point and color me 'Doh.'
Totally cracked up at this: “I’m having to rebuild Stormer’s Keytar again because Pizazz threw it into the mansion’s pool -- again!” Pizzazz would so do that.
Hee; I wanted Techrat to be working on something that would attract Minx's interest and I figured I couldn't go wrong with Pizazz being destructive. *G*
“Isn’t Beldrix dead?” Rapture asked. “Eric, where did you find this creep?” I almost think the New Agey Rapture would be more intrigued by and less dismissive of this. Either from a supernatural point of view or a con artist's.
Another good point and a bit of a flub on my part. I figure at the moment Rapture isn't feeling the need to try and impress either Eric or Techrat (particularly not Techrat) with her mystical abilities. And Eric is probably not inclined to explain that "Oh, yeah, he built a time machine about six months ago -- we're not letting that happen again, thanks." *G*
Definitely good. You could expand this easily if you wanted to or let it stand. Ah, Techrat.
Yay! Glad you liked it! I've got a few ideas percolating for other stories that will hopefully gel into something good.
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Date: 2008-06-22 08:32 pm (UTC)That one's one of my favorites.
I'm not sure of the stretching capacity of the word, but can they be Eurotrash when two are American?
*slips into Marvel No-Prize Mode* Well, going by their attitude, I can see Eric using the term for them because they've been living in Europe and likely picked up the attitude there and Eric probably either doesn't know they're actually from the States or doesn't care that Minx is the only actual European in the group but in all actuality you raise a good point and color me 'Doh.'
Totally cracked up at this: “I’m having to rebuild Stormer’s Keytar again because Pizazz threw it into the mansion’s pool -- again!” Pizzazz would so do that.
Hee; I wanted Techrat to be working on something that would attract Minx's interest and I figured I couldn't go wrong with Pizazz being destructive. *G*
“Isn’t Beldrix dead?” Rapture asked. “Eric, where did you find this creep?”
I almost think the New Agey Rapture would be more intrigued by and less dismissive of this. Either from a supernatural point of view or a con artist's.
Another good point and a bit of a flub on my part. I figure at the moment Rapture isn't feeling the need to try and impress either Eric or Techrat (particularly not Techrat) with her mystical abilities. And Eric is probably not inclined to explain that "Oh, yeah, he built a time machine about six months ago -- we're not letting that happen again, thanks." *G*
Definitely good. You could expand this easily if you wanted to or let it stand. Ah, Techrat.
Yay! Glad you liked it! I've got a few ideas percolating for other stories that will hopefully gel into something good.