I like this.

I like the little specifics - Huffer's voice grating like a rat-tail file, Huffer using a grease pencil to draw on the walls with.

I like the idea that the War has worn down Huffer and made him into the annoying mech he is today.

Mostly, I like the theme. Reconstruction, planning for the future even if that future might not come to pass. There is more to being a Transformer than fighting in the Great War, and they shouldn't forget that.